Tuesday, 21 March 2017

Author/Novel Spotlight: Jeremy Bullard

Today, I am highlighting Jeremy Bullard, Christian novelist of 2 science-fiction and fantasy novels. I have watched Jeremy describe his writing journey and these two novels in a Facebook group we both belong to and I am impressed with the depth of imagination and creativity he has. I am sure you will detect some of this as you read his post.

So sit back and see what Jeremy has to say about himself and his Facets of Reality novels, Gemworld and Fractures. 

But first, a little about Jeremy: 


Jeremy Bullard is an author, an amateur singer/songwriter, a hobby knifemaker, a TV buff, and a recovering MMORPGamer. He has been involved in various creative pursuits for as far back as he can remember, counting his relationship with Jesus Christ and his devotion to his family as the greatest of these endeavors.

His creative nature and fascination with extreme possibility led him quite naturally to science fiction and fantasy fandom. This attraction has colored the full spectrum of his writing, spurring him to pieces ranging from Stephen King and Quantum Leap fan fiction to Twilight Zone-esque monologues to finally releasing a project based in a world completely of his own making.

Jeremy lives in Southeast Alabama (also known as "God's Country") with his beautiful wife, three incredible kids, and two smarter-than-the-average dogs -- one of which knows how to open a screen door from the outside. Still don't know how she figured that one out... 

Now let's have a look at the first two books in the Facets of Reality series:

Gemworld (Facets of Reality Book 1)


For a US Navy SEAL, life can be many things -- challenging, thrilling, rewarding, hazardous, unexpectedly short. Lieutenant James Salvatori knew all this going in, but nothing could have prepared him for his mission to Laos. What started as an anti-terror operation turned into an experience that was quite literally out of this world!

New lands, mythical creatures, powerful magics, immortal tyrants. What's a guy like Sal to do, except lock and load?


A battle won.
A commander lost.
A lot of war left to fight.

James "Sal" Salvatori is struggling to find his place in the world -- and doing a heckuva job. He's gone from Navy SEAL to shol'tuk apprentice (read "uber ninja"), from a lonely prisoner to a leader in a far-reaching rebellion, and from an alien in a world of magic to the Prism, a mage of prophecy. But the victories he's won have been costly, and they're only going to get harder.

Enemies lurk in darkened corners. Secrets beckon from ancient archives. The forces of the Highest march to quell the rebellion. The pages of prophecy are unfolding.

There is no rest for the once-SEAL -- it's time to lock and load.

I asked Jeremy why he wrote the Facets of Reality series and whether there are any Biblical themes:

Gemworld started life as a way to alleviate my boredom, really. I was working night shift at a local jail, and had taken to reading a wide range of material – Stephen King, Margaret Weis and Tracy Hickman, John Grisham, Tim LaHaye and Jerry Jenkins, and so on – but found myself between books and nothing immediately at hand to draw me.

Now, I'd always been creative (or crazy, depending on who you ask), and this particular night, I found myself asking, “If I were to create a world like these guys (I had just finished the Weis/Hickman series, The Deathgate Cycle), what would it look like?” Well, that question turned into a rough outline of different magical influences, which in turn led to fictional histories. Before my shift had ended, I actually had created the world I was wondering about. Over the course of the next few days, I refined the world, “explored” it you might say, and started actually working on Gemworld in earnest.

I never really had a plan to write Gemworld and its sequel Fractures as Christian novels, but as novels by a Christian writer. All I was after – then as now – was a quality story that would engage the reader. I wanted to write a book that I'd love to read myself. That's not to say that God had nothing to do with it, of course. As another blogger had put it in his review of Gemworld, “Reality [of God, Jesus, and the Spirit] is largely subliminal, but it’s definitely there.” He'd mentioned that it was “not a Full Gospel book and barely Evangelical,” and I'll be honest, I didn't know how to take this at first. But upon reflection, I realized that this was exactly what I was aiming for. In my mind, the Christ within me necessarily finds His way into everything I do, if in fact it's not me who lives but Christ who lives in me. That being the case, it made perfect sense that Christ would find a way to be included in something that wasn't written explicitly to draw people to Him, but was nevertheless written by someone devoted to Him.

As to Christian themes, I'd say it largely comes from the “alternate reality” aspect of the book, in that God is not merely the God of What Is, but also of everything that Could Be. God is present in this book and subsequent books as the Crafter, complete with a Savior-figure in messac'el (the Heart of the Crafter), at least one champion in a secondary character – Reit Windon du'Nograh, known as el'Yatza (the Crafter's Hand) – and at least two denominations in the Priesthood of the Way, and a more “common” sect that follows the Crafter according to their holy text, Unending Seasons.

If what you have now read has whetted your appetite for more, here is an excerpt and Jeremy's reason for choosing it: 

In selecting an excerpt, I had a hard time deciding on how to best exemplify how complex the series is. It's gritty, funny, sometimes even gory (though I try to keep that to a minimum). But first and foremost, I try to make my world and its characters real enough that my reader can easily become invested in them. No character is disposable, even if they have only one line in one scene, because in the real world, no life is disposable. Every life is unique. Every life has its own story, its own hero and villain. Every life is believable, even if the most unbelievable things happen to them. If I can achieve that, then everything else falls into place.

So with that mindset, I decided on this fight scene from Fractures featuring my main character, a former Navy SEAL who has become apprenticed to the assassin Retzu since finding himself in this alternate reality. It demonstrates the kind of action – and inter-action – that a reader might expect. Things to note are the hilts (signifying rank in the shol'tuk) and the mantras associated with the hilts, which hopefully speak to the level of detail I strive for in my worldbuilding. There are other scenes that I felt were better suited for what Peter was asking for, but most of them had spoilers for Gemworld, so hopefully this will suffice.

~~~~~~~~~~~~Start of Excerpt~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sal's bowels liquefied at the thought of Marissa being in danger. He edged her into an alley to the right of the street, and hissed, "Run!"

They sprinted north, the passageway barely wide enough for the two of them to run abreast. Sal urged Marissa onward while he trotted sideways, looked back over his shoulder for his pursuers.

The man with the sword appeared before them, as if from nowhere. He backhanded Marissa as she came in range, the crack of his hand against her jaw echoing down the alley. She fell in a dazed heap.

"No!" Sal shouted, drawing his doeskin-hilted katana. In a flash, the other man's sword was in his hand, neatly blocking Sal's chop. Sal saw with sickening clarity that the man's hilt bore a copper winding.

He was shol'tuk.

Sal didn't have time to ponder this before the man countered his attack, showering Sal with cuts and chops and slices of his own. It was all that Sal could do to keep from being butchered.

The doeskin-hilted adherent blocked everything out -- the ringing of the katanas, the two men yet to join the party, the groggy redhead still kneeling to one side of the alley. The world shrank in focus, until the alley was all that was left. The alley, and the copper-hilt that controlled it.

Death is raw, like the hide of the newly skinned bull.

Death is soft, like the doe in her winter coat.

The alley was narrow, limiting the full range of attacks that the copper might employ. Sal used this to his advantage. He pressed the attack, using fist and foot as much as he did his sword. He reached out to Marissa through Emerald and wielded. He could spare no concentration to build a proper spell for Marissa -- not as Aten'rih had taught him -- so he simply willed that the magic heal her however she required, all the while desperately lashing out at his attacker.

The fury of his assault set the other man on his heels. He tilted off balance, scrabbling with his feet for purchase. Seeing an opening in the copper's defense, Sal jabbed, then spun and cut diagonally, slicing the shol'tuk's chest open and knocking his katana away. The assassin fell heavily, his breath leaving him in a gurgling whoosh.

Sal spun to meet the other two men... only to find them already dealt with. Retzu stood over one at the far end of the alley, and Marissa was just finishing the other one up.

Marissa?!?

For all that she looked dainty, there was nothing fragile about her at that moment. Blood streamed from her nose and from the corner of her mouth, but the look in her eye wasn't hurt. It was rage. She grit her teeth as she lashed out, her doubled fists catching her attacker squarely under the jaw. Before he had time to fall backward, she grabbed his shoulders and yanked him down into her knee, driving it deep into his face. Blood squirted to both sides as his nose shattered. She released him, and he dropped in a near-lifeless pile at her feet, eyes glazed and struggling for breath. Sal stood there looking at her, agape.

"What?" she said, self-consciously. "I have brothers."

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~End of Excerpt~~~~~~~~~~~~

Gemworld has a good ranking on Amazon: 


To see all 35 Reviews, go here



on March 5, 2016

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This book had some strong pros and some definite cons, but in the end the positives outweigh the negatives and deserve a net 4 stars.


As always with my reviews, I like to start with the good news.

Pros:


Incredibly original magic system – In the world of fantasy, rehashed tropes and variations on a theme are just part of the landscape. This is pretty much an accepted fact among fans of the genre, so when someone comes up with something truly different, it is like a breath of fresh air. Bullard’s magical system in Gemworld absolutely qualifies as fascinating and original. I can’t recall anything like it before, and I am fairly well read in the genre. There might be something out there, I just haven’t seen it. I would like to have seen a bit more “cost” of free wielding the power in the books, to make it less of a candidate for a deus ex machina problem solution, but at least as far as the first book goes, Bullard restrains himself from pulling the magical silver bullet out of the hat.


Deep, three-dimensional worldbuilding – I thoroughly enjoy puttering around in a well-built world. If it is tangible enough to feel real, and there are no logical contradictions that draw me out of my “willing suspension of disbelief” that is a huge pro. So many would-be novelists draw out these paper-thin worlds with all the depth of a cardboard cutout. I appreciate that Bullard has obviously put considerable time and effort into developing the world.


A truly likeable protagonist – That may seem like a given, but I continue to be amazed at the number of MC’s that are annoying, whiny, co-dependent, or complete bung-holes. Sometimes it is intentional, ala Thomas Covenant, but sometimes a writer simply doesn’t know how to make the MC likeable. Bullard does not suffer from that. Sal is an average Joe, well as average a Joe as a Navy SEAL can be. His “out of this world” mannerisms and speech just make this character sparkle against the backdrop of the world. I must admit, I was a little put off by how easily and in-stride he seemed to take being transported into a completely different world, but as I read through the novel, “unflappable” seemed to be a consistent characteristic of Sal’s. This was SO consistently written, that looking back his ease of adjustment to a completely new reality fits perfectly with his character. This was very well done.


Foreshadowing – Now this one is going to strike you as odd, because this same element appears in the Cons list as well. Why? Because sometimes it is wonderfully subtle and masterfully done, and other times…not so much. But this is the Pros section, so I will say there are elements which are telegraphed with amazing subtlety and a masterful hand. Had he been able to do this with all his foreshadowing, it might have garnered at least another half star.


Cons:


Plot – Honestly this is the most glaring issue I think with the book. Sal gets dropped into this completely new world without purpose, explanation or quest. He then just goes about for at least half the book trying to figure out his new reality without any real direction or purpose. A solid plot-hook is what keeps readers reading, especially in a book of this size (see wordiness below). Without it, readers soon wonder why they keep reading. What is the goal? What is the purpose? What is the burning question readers need to have answered? “Why am I still reading” or “Where is this going” are not the questions you want readers asking.


Wordy – Honestly an editor with a good pair of editing scissors could have cut 20% of the words in this book and not damaged the story a bit. There are places where things are rehashed, restated, and belabored that a solid content editor could have helped clean up. Copy editing is another issue, and the number of errors was enough to make it noticeable. Some typos are to be expected in a work this size, but they were frequent enough to note they were there, which when readers are churning away wondering why they are still reading, it is not a good thing to have continually popping up.


Foreshadowing – Again, as brilliantly as some instances of this are handled, others are so clumsy and heavy-handed as to ruin parts of the read. Some things are telegraphed to the point readers already know how this particular scene or sequence is going to turn out, so one starts skimming to get to the next significant action part. I was sad that a few opportunities to build real suspense and reader interest were neutered by telling the end before the beginning.


Overall, if asked if I would recommend this book, I say yes. For readers capable of churning through huge volumes of words quickly, the strengths of the pros are strong enough to make it an enjoyable read. For those who have to budget their time carefully as to what they read, there might be better “bang for your buck” options out there. That said, I know authors learn and grow with each book, and there are enough strengths in Gemworld to where I am looking forward to reading and seeing where Bullard takes the second book. If the author can address some of the challenges with this first book, I will be a fan of the series.

on August 17, 2015

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on October 1, 2014

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on January 2, 2015

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on September 22, 2014

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This type of fiction is my absolute favorite. And Mr. Bullard delivers the perfect combo of American culture, Medieval stuff, magic-that-makes-sense-and-could-actually-work, and swoon worthy guys running around with swords. The characters are solid, diverse, and loveable and the superpowers are really cool. The ending is rather suspenseful, so you have to be prepared to not be happy where you're left, but the ride is definitely worth the wait for Book 2.

on December 24, 2014

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on October 13, 2016

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Fractures has two positive reviews so far: 




on March 5, 2017

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on March 11, 2017

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You can find out more about Jeremy and his novels at the following social media platforms:

Amazon Author's Page (with book links within) –

Facebook Author's Page – https://www.facebook.com/facetsofreality/

Personal Blog – https://nashdude.wordpress.com/

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Readers and reviews are an author's best asset, so I encourage any reader of Christian science fiction and fantasy, Christian inspirational, to consider reading the Facets of Reality series and submit a review on Goodreads, Amazon, Barnes and Noble and on Google+, Twitter, Facebook, Instagram, Pinterest (or any other social media you subscribe to).

Monday, 13 March 2017

The Warrior Spy by Dony Jay

The Warrior Spy


The CIA has a problem. Its best clandestine operatives keep turning up dead. And now, as if things couldn't get any worse, a Defense Department scientist, specializing in high-energy lasers, has gone missing. America needs answers. And fast.

Delta Force operator Reagan Rainey, on temporary duty assignment with a secret CIA entity known as Directorate Twelve, is tasked to do just that--get answers. But to do so, he not only has to outwit and outmaneuver a dangerous cabal of foreign actors believed to be at the center of it all, he must contend with a deadly assassin who is bent on destroying him.

Relying on his bedrock faith in Almighty God, Rainey is forced to race against the clock to uncover what is really going on and why, before his beloved America is pushed to the brink of war.

The Warrior Spy is the first book in the Warrior Spy thriller series. It is jam-packed with heart-pounding action, all-out spy warfare and a new American hero that is sure to please.

It's comparable to thrillers by such authors as Robert Ludlum, Brad Thor, and Vince Flynn, while also containing a clear faith element. If you love for-God-and-country-type books, The Warrior Spy was written for you!

The Guru's Review: 


The author asked me to review this novel before it's release date in December 2015. I was unable to due to my current reviewing schedule at that stage. Having now read it, I am glad that I had kept it on my To Be Reviewed List. 

I thoroughly enjoyed The Warrior Spy. I have read many Christian military novels and I can gladly add this to my list of favourites. One thought that kept running through my mind while reading, was that Jay definitely knows how to craft a novel. Its construction is well done. He has taken heed of the mentoring that he has received. He is now proficient and "armed" to write more novels of this standard. Every author who has had a background in the military will have their own take on their life in this field. It definitely shows in their novels. It is this that adds great diversity in plot, action, suspense and knowledge of the military in this special ops genre. I have not read one like this, though. Everything has been "upped". Compared to some that I have read, the intrigue, violence, deceit, corruption, religious hatred of the West, in this case, America, is prolific in this novel. The violence more so than others. I am not saying that I endorse or condone this level of violence, nor am I saying it should not be there or watered down. Jay is portraying it as he has experienced it and making it real as possible. To do otherwise would have made this novel less realistic and credible and pretty much a joke to read. 

It is all the above that held my interest and absorbed me on the daily train journey to and from work, to the point where I almost missed my destination station many times. 

Another aspect that kept me rooted in the plot was the characterisation. All novels of this genre have an ops team with a leader, usually an alpha male. Entrance Reagan Rainey. One determined, self-made man with integrity and virtue but one who has a strong faith in God. What impressed me about him was that despite his independence of thought and action and being disciplined as a Delta soldier, he knew his boundaries when it came to exacting justice against the perpetrators. Many times, he came very close, to going further and seek revenge, but was constrained by his knowledge and obedience of God and His commands, 
As he played through several different plans, possibilities and angles, it happened. A verse from Scipture bubbed up into his thought-Deuteronomy 32:35:
Vengeance is Mine, and recompense; Their foot shall slip in due time; For the day of their calamity is at hand, And the things to come hasten upon them. 
Rainer considered his motives, reminded himself to keep them in check. he would do his best to stop the treat, prevent another 9/11, kill if need be, but not exact revenge. This was tricky to explain, but he understood the concept perfectly. He believed in it. 
This is one example of the faith that Rainey exhibits in this novel as he lives out his faith. There is a conversion scene that is quickly actioned by the recipients of Jay's quick testimony. While I felt Jay had rushed this scene, I had to realize that this was happening at an intense and critical moment where time was not their luxury. Rainey and his two new converts had only a short time for this to happen. God is not constrained by time. There were a few other occasions where Rainey had no problem praying for those under his charge. Convictions like this can only enhance this leader's integrity and respect from those in his team and his relationship with them. It gives me great consolation knowing that there is special ops personnel like Rainey in the military who are Christian and willing to act out their faith in their occupation. As we all should in our chosen profession, but more so men and women in the military. They have to lay down their lives for others either for their own or for another country. 

As Rainey states, 
Did anyone back home truly comprehend, truly appreciate the unbelievable sacrifice he and his mates as well as all of those within the intelligence and special operations communities at large were willing to make for their nation, for each other, for all that was right and good? This was the brutal reality of the world in which he and his fellow shadow warriors operated day in and day out all around the globe. A fight between good and evil.
Jay has developed the rest of the characters and the bonds/relationship between them well and relational. In some novels, you know that the other characters are very much secondary and provide a platform for the main character to be always centre stage. Not so in a novel like this. Teamwork and being a special ops unit has to have structure, discipline, and unity. When something happens to one of them, you feel for them and what their leader is going through. You understand and root for this leader and the other members of the team. You become endeared to these characters. 

Jay has also done the same to Rainey's family and closest inner circle. I enjoyed these relationships. I wondered why he had included the degree of relationship with his sister and it seems that this is the author's intention. Maddie is to play a larger role in the next novel based on its plot. I do sense that despite this, there might be another reason the author has included her in both novels. Any reader who sees how she handles herself when kidnapped should be able to join the dots. 

I am looking forward to the next installment in this series, Artifacts of Conspiracy. This will be released soon. I have an advanced reader's copy to review now. 

Strongly Recommended.

World Building 4/5 

Characters 5/5 


Spiritual Level 4/5 

Story 5/5 

Enemy Spiritual Level 0/5

Overall Rating: 4.5/5

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Wednesday, 8 March 2017

Author/Novel Spotlight: Jason A. Dimmick

Today, I am spotlighting Christian novelist, Jason A. Dimmick. He contacted me throgh this blog. One of my aims for this blog is to promote debut Christian authors so after accepting to review his novel Armor of the Fallen: Wielder of the Gauntlets, Book 1, I offered him this post to help increase his exposure and promote his novel. I am looking forward to reading this and others in the series.

So without further ado, sit back and allow yourself to explore the world of Jason A. Dimmock.


Hello, my name is Jason A. Dimmick and “Wielder of the Gauntlets” is the debut novel in my debut series “Armor of the Fallen”. I am a carpenter by trade and have worked most of my life doing construction. I currently, however, work in a local high school as the night custodian foreman. That’s right, I clean toilets used by teenagers for a living. Glamorous work it is not, but it’s not as bad as you might think and I’m very grateful for what God has provided. Plus it has allowed me the opportunity to pursue a side career of becoming a Christian author.

As a former teen leader and now young adult Sunday school teacher in my church, I have a burden to reach out to the teen and young adult market with inspiring tales of fiction that stay true to the founding principles found in God’s word. Tales that I hope and pray will help them in their daily walk with God while be entertaining and fun to read.

I was born and raised in the farm country of central Pennsylvania where I still reside with my supportive wife Talisa, and two children Alanna and Torin. Along with writing, I have a passion for anything automotive related, the power sports industry such as ATV’s and side by sides, and martial arts. I will be combining the first two into a vlog in which I will be talking about self-publishing, writing, or whatever is on my mind at the time, while exploring in my side by side or in my truck. It will be called “Author Trek” and will be airing on youtube spring of 2017.

Now let's have a look at Wielder of the Gauntlets:

An ancient power calls. A modern warrior rises. An age old battle will be fought for the last time.

The life Tim is living is not the life God has intended for him. Now he is faced with a choice that will determine the fate of all mankind. After spending the last twelve years of his life in an orphanage, Tim must now move away from everything and everyone he knows to live with an uncle he never knew he had. What happens while with his uncle will not only drastically change Tim's’ life forever, but will place the fate of mankind in his hands and answer all the questions Tim has about his past. The Gauntlets have chosen their Wielder. Will Tim answer the call and fight against the Fallen?

Answer the call. Wield the Gauntlets. Fight the Fallen. Protect all mankind.

I asked Jason why he wrote Wielder of the Gauntlets and whether there are any Biblical themes: 

The first book in the Armor of the Fallen trilogy, Wielder of the Gauntlets, deals with a choice all Christians face in their daily walk with God, Service. In this day and age it’s so easy to give God lip service and say we will serve him but when things get tough we are so quick to turn our backs and blame God for the trials we are under. Often for the Christian, this leads to a walk apart from God.

Main Book Theme: The call and answer of a Christian for Service

I wanted this struggle to be the main theme for our hero throughout the trilogy, with each book focusing on a different aspect of a servant's walk. Wielder of the Gauntlets, being the first book of the trilogy, displays the characteristics found in someone who has just come to know Christ. For most Christians, this is a time when we are on fire for the Lord and have an unmovable zeal for service that nothing can break. We see this in our hero, Tim, as he fully accepts the unbelievable circumstances he is placed in and chooses to fully serve God by wielding the gauntlets and taking up the fight against the fallen.

As the story progresses throughout the series, we will see Tim faced with many choices that mirror what we as Christians face ( howbeit in a much more fantastical way) in our daily walk with God. My goal is to make the story and inspirational tale for young Christians and ultimately show to them the rewards of fully giving their lives over to God to serve him in whatever he calls them to do where ever he calls them to go.

If what you have now read has whetted your appetite for more, here is an excerpt and Jason's reason for choosing it: 

Chapter twelve of Wielder of the Gauntlets encompasses every aspect and idea seen through out the entire book and gives a great impression on what to expect out of the book as a whole. From fast paced action to the Christian themes and battles we are faced with on a day to day basis. I wanted my book to be full of action with very little dull moments. Action keeps the reader engaged and makes the story compelling to read, driving the reader to the next chapter. This chapter takes place in the heat of a battle between two secondary characters that play an important role in the main protagonist, Tim, development and shows what kind of action a reader can expect. There is also a strong Christian theme seen in chapter twelve. While the book as a whole carries the main theme of being a servant for God, there are several underlying themes that are seen through out the book that deal with the walk of a Christian. In chapter twelve we have an underlying theme of an internal struggle over a family member who has turned away from God and fallen into what would seem to be a point of no return in their spiritual walk. Most, if not all Christians, has a least one family member or friend that we have a burden to lead to Christ but they always fight us to the bitter end. We see this take place in Ju-Long over his brother Kau. We see how Ju-Long, like a lot of us, get to the point where he feels that there is no longer any good left in Kau to save. Is there any good left in Kau? You’ll have to read the book to find out. But I will say that most times in our life we give up on someone long before God does.


 ~~~~~~~~~~~~Start of Excerpt~~~~~~~~~~~~

Ju-Long circles around the edge of the stage till he reaches one of the corners. He takes a deep breath and allows the gauntlets' energy flow to increase. He bends his knees, widens his stance, and channels the energy down into his legs. The world around him slows to a standstill. Ju-Long launches off the floor, leaping directly for Rhi-Nu. He covers the distance between them with ease, throwing a kick aimed at Rhi-Nu's chest. Just inches from impact, Rhi-Nu's armor glows. Rhi-Nu dodges left and Ju-Long's foot simply grazes by. The instant Ju-Long's feet hit the floor, he spins around and throws another kick. Rhi-Nu is too slow and the kick makes a dull thud as it strikes the steel armor. Ju-Long instantly follows up, not giving Rhi-Nu time to react. Ju-Long jumps, spins and brings his leg around to land a kick against the side of Rhi-Nu's head. Ju-Long lands, jumps back out of reach and allows the flow of energy to return to normal. Rhi-Nu just stands there and grins.That didn't do much, says Tim.

I wasn't meant to, replies Ju-Long.

The flow of energy increases again, this time only going as far as Ju-Long's arms and shoulders. He charges forward, closing the gap between them. Once in range, he throws a punch at Rhi-Nu's side. It hits with a resounding ring as the metal of the gauntlets strikes the steel armor. Rhi-Nu looks down, amused by the hit. Ju-Long immediately throws a punch to the other side, but it is met with the same effect as the first.

Rhi-Nu shakes his head, "Kind of embarrassing, isn't it?"

A massive energy surge from the gauntlets runs through Ju-Long’s body, filling every muscle with added strength and speed. Ju-Long drives upward using every muscle in his body to propel him. He brings his right arm up, throwing an uppercut that hits squarely under Rhi-Nu's chin. The punch has such a great amount of force behind it that Rhi-Nu is lifted off his feet and sent backwards a couple feet before landing on his back. The crowd around erupts in cheer as Rhi-Nu lies there still. Ju-Longs walks over and kneels down, making sure that Rhi-Nu is out cold but otherwise fine. He looks up at Kau expecting to find him looking angry and frustrated at yet another defeat. Instead, he finds Kau sitting there looking as smug as ever with a big grin on his face.

That's when Ju-Long notices that Rhi-Nu's armor is glowing. Dimly at first, but growing steadily brighter. Rhi-Nu's arm shoots forward and grabs hold of Ju-Long's gauntlet. Ju-Long pulls against it to break free but the grip is too strong. A symbol begins to form on the front of Rhi-Nu's armor as if it is being burned on by an invisible branding iron. His body arches upward and the glow burns to a brilliant flash of light. Rhi-Nu suddenly rolls to his side and hurls Ju-Long into the air. Soaring across the stage headfirst, a graceful flip in midair allows Ju-Long to land on his feet as Rhi-Nu rises to his feet. The symbol on the chest of Rhi-Nu's steel armor glows bright red against the silver glow of the rest.

Demon Guard? What does that mean? Tim asks as he reads the symbol.

That means that Rhi-Nu is no longer in control. He is now a slave to the armor.

Ju-Long looks up at Gwan and Gwan meets his eyes with a look of fear. Ju-Long breaks eye contact and looks around at the crowd who has gone silent over the change of events. With a slight nod, Gwan acknowledges what Ju-Long is hinting at, then calls some men over to give them instruction. The men quickly disappear into the crowd and start evacuating all the villagers from the village square, quietly and orderly. Ju-Long motions to Gwan to leave as well, but Gwan shakes his head in disagreement. With a sigh of disapproval, Ju-Long looks to Kau.

"Do not look at me that way, brother," says Kau. "I've had about all I can stand of your self-righteous attitude. You're worse than the missionary these days. Oh—that reminds me." Kau reaches into his pocket and throws what he pulls from it onto the stage near Ju-Long. "I've heard he has been forced to take a little bit of a detour on his way back."

Ju-Long looks down to find a small Bible lying in front of him. Picking it up, he opens the front cover to find a picture of a man, woman, and small child smiling in front of a little church. Tim notices the man in the picture looks just like Pastor John from the orphanage but quickly dismisses the thought as just a coincidence. An evil smile beams across Kau's face. As Ju-Long looks back up to Kau, the last bit of hope Ju-Long has so desperately been clinging on to for his brother's salvation shatters and fades. Gwan, seeing what was thrown onto the stage, rushes over and grabs Kau by his collar raising him off the platform floor.

"What have you done!" Gwan demands.

"Careful now, brother. Wouldn't want you to break any vows."

"Tell me!"

"Gwan!" shouts Ju-Long from the stage. Gwan snaps out of his rage and releases Kau from his grip.

"Don't worry, little brother," Kau says to Gwan. "The missionary is perfectly fine. For now, anyway. I just needed some assurance that Ju-Long wouldn't back out of this fight. Regardless of the outcome, as long as Ju-Long continues to fight, the missionary will be returned free from harm. However—and make no mistake about this—try to flee or send anyone to find him, and he will meet your God before the sun has set on this day."

Gwan begins to reply "You bett—"

"Kau," interrupts Ju-Long, "make no mistake about this. I will defeat this abomination and you will return the missionary, or else."

"Or else what, Ju-Long? You'll do like Father and banish me away again? Oh, how I do grow tired of your rhetoric."

A single tear breaks free from Ju-Long's heart and rushes to his eye for escape. As it goes, it collects all the hope, love, and mercy Ju-Long still has for his brother and locks it within. Finding release from his eye, it slides down his cheek and hangs from his chin, unwilling to let go. But there is no going back from the path it has taken. Ju-Long's gauntlets begin to glow vibrantly as their power rages through his body. The tear finally gives in and releases its grip, falling to the stage floor. The tear, like Kau, is lost forever.

"Or else I will do what Father truly set out to do the day you were banished. I will send you to face your eternal judgment."

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Jason states the Wielder of the Gauntlets will be released on March 17, 2017. It will be available in e-book and paperback formats from Amazon. Also available in KDP Select for free for the first five days of launch.

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